Humming Hearts Publishing
Fiction Manuscript Editors and Book Coaching Services for writers.
What makes us different?
We don’t just edit books; we are writers.
Serena is our manuscript editing and book coaching service provider. She’s our founder, a writer, editor, story coach, and a filmmaker.
At Humming Hearts Publishing, we seek the heartbeat in every novel, not the next sensationalized story.
Upcoming projects
DEC 2025 | Short Story “Winter Cat”
By Serena montoya | Final Edit
2026 | Poetry Collection “To Cast Moonlight”
By Serena montoya | Final Edit
2026 | Feature Film “serving memories”
Credit: Serena is a producer with Reaching Through Films | In post-Prodcution
2026 | Feature Film “The Reel Hustle”
Credit: Serena is a producer with Reaching Through Films | In Pre-Production
2026 | Fiction Novel “Francesca’s Flowers”
By Serena montoya | Draft Two
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Our Services
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Manuscript Editing services
Whether you plan to indie publish or go the traditional route, we offer manuscript editing services to strengthen your novel, novella, short story, or any other form of fiction project.
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Book Coaching
Our book coaching services help you write a fiction novel and build a new writing habit that lasts.
Meet the storyteller
Serena Montoya
Fiction book coach and developmental editor
Are you looking for a book editor or story coach who understands narrative, not one who just follows the next big trend?
I am dedicated to helping writers craft timeless stories.
I help writers explore theme(s) through characters that your readers will miss by the time they reach the end.
I believe storytelling can move and mend a soul. So, if you’re ready to fill the world with your heartbeat, then let’s chat about your novel.
I also accept short stories, novellas, children’s books, poetry collections, and screenplays.
Testimonials
Brian P. Kennedy
"Serena’s editorial analysis provided me with a variety of insightful perspectives. Her probing questions, specific ideas and clear direction helped me to see what I could not see myself. After considering her input, I wanted to dive back into my story and embrace her suggestions.”
Rebecca Smith
"Serena’s professionalism can’t be matched. I’ve spent a lot of time researching editors, you can tell she truly practices what she preaches. She took her time and ensured I was satisfied with the revisions. I cannot recommend her enough!”
Mayte M.
“Serena reviewed my manuscript with such precision and attention to detail. She was kind and honest, never stripping my voice, but helped me see where I could strengthen my book. I’m excited to dive back into my novel.”
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