Humming Hearts Publishing

Fiction Manuscript Editors and Book Coaching Services for writers.

Serena Book Editing and Coaching Services for Indie Authors

What makes us different?

We don’t just edit books; we are writers.

Serena is our manuscript editing and book coaching service provider. She’s our founder, a writer, editor, story coach, and a filmmaker.

At Humming Hearts Publishing, we seek the heartbeat in every novel, not the next sensationalized story.

Serena’s Upcoming projects

May 2026 | Novella Part One - “Winter Cat”

By Serena montoya | Final Edit

2026 | Poetry Collection “To Cast Moonlight”

By Serena montoya | Final Edit

2026 | Feature Film “serving memories”

Credit: Serena is a producer with Reaching Through Films | In post-Prodcution

Watch the teaser trailer!
Watch the teaser trailer!

2026 | Fiction Novel “Francesca’s Flowers”

By Serena montoya | Draft Two

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    Our Services

    • Affordable fiction manuscript editing services

      Manuscript Editing services

      Whether you plan to indie publish or go the traditional route, we offer manuscript editing services to strengthen your novel, novella, short story, or any other form of fiction project.

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    • Book coaching services for writers

      Book Coaching

      Our book coaching services help you write a fiction novel and build a new writing habit that lasts.

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    Testimonials

    • "Serena’s editorial analysis provided me with a variety of insightful perspectives. Her probing questions, specific ideas and clear direction helped me to see what I could not see myself. After considering her input, I wanted to dive back into my story and embrace her suggestions.”  

      — Brian P. Kennedy

    • "Serena’s professionalism can’t be matched. I’ve spent a lot of time researching editors, you can tell she truly practices what she preaches. She took her time and ensured I was satisfied with the revisions. I cannot recommend her enough!” 

      —Rebecca Smith

    • “Serena reviewed my manuscript with such precision and attention to detail. She was kind and honest, never stripping my voice, but helped me see where I could strengthen my book. I’m excited to dive back into my novel.”

      —Mayte M.

    Meet the storyteller

    Serena Montoya
    Author, fiction book coach, and managing editor

    Book coach and fiction editor

    Are you looking for a book editor or story coach who understands narrative, not one who just follows the next big trend?

    I am dedicated to helping writers craft timeless stories.

    I help writers explore theme(s) through characters that your readers will miss by the time they reach the end.

    I believe storytelling can move and mend a soul. So, if you’re ready to fill the world with your heartbeat, then let’s chat about your novel.

    I also accept short stories, novellas, children’s books, poetry collections, and screenplays.

    Learn more about Serena
    Learn more about Serena

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